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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 Apr 2011 at 08:55
Originally posted by Belthazor Belthazor wrote:

Nok,this bit wasn't supossed to be public...
 
Want me to tell them all how the Orc Mage looked at you? Wink
What? In awe, amazement and wonder? And just a dash of fear?  Wink
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Apr 2011 at 11:08
5 days without a chapter!  Am going bonkers waiting!!! Censored  I need my fix!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Apr 2011 at 11:11
/me cowers in fear
/me starts finishing off his work right away
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Apr 2011 at 12:31

Nokigon carefully watched Belthazor's eyes, waiting for some sort of hint that would give away his movements. It came, lightning fast.

Belthazor's sword seemed to move of it's own accord as it flashed out of his sheath and came whistling down at Nokigon's skull.

But Nokigon was equally fast. His shield blocked the weapon, leaving his sword open to stab at Belthazor's torso. But his opponent was wickedly fast, faster than any other opponent he'd ever faced, and his sword was sent bouncing away.

Nokigon used his momentum to spin, however, and flash a deadly strike at Belthazor's neck. But Belthazor's speed saved him, and Nokigon's sword went flashing through mid air.

Hell! He's good! Nokigon knew that one mistake, one careless movement could get him killed. But Nokigon was a soldier. There was nothing he enjoyed more than an honourable fight against a good opponent, and this ticked both boxes. And as Belthazor's sword flashed at his ear, Nokigon stopped day dreaming.

He leapt forward in a confident attack, his sword moving almost too quickly for the eye to see. But Belthazor blocked each one. Not one blow got inside his defence; not one even came close. Therefore, Nokigon realised he would have to do the unexpected.

Nokigon roared a war cry and feinted at Belthazor's neck, then his leg, then struck at his sword hand.

Belthazor eventually took the bait. He didn't fall for the first feint; but he did the second. Thrown off balance by expecting a blow that never came, he was completely unprepared for the blow that knocked his sword out of his hand. And then Nokigon's sword was pressing against his neck.

Nokigon grinned. "Yield?" he asked. Belthazor grinned as well- too confidently. Nokigon looked down to find Belthazor's knife pressing into his stomach.

"I thought a draw." Belthazor joked. Nokigon nodded, and they both withdrew. Then they burst out laughing.

"How did you do that? That was fantastic!" Belthazor asked the second he got his breath back.

"Oh, I don't know. That was the best swordfight I've had for a long time." Nokigon grinned broadly.

"Oh, come on. You never even broke a sweat." Belthazor said self-disparagingly. Nokigon opened his mouth in mock horror, and pointed a finger at one of his many sweat patches.

"And what is that, exactly?" Nokigon asked, with mock retort.

Belthazor grinned. "Dribble."

Nokigon shook his head disparingly. Then he became serious.

"Where are you going to go now?"

Belthazor stared into space. "I think that I'll spend the night here, in Mortifera. We can go our separate ways in the morning." Belthazor met Nokigon's eyes, smiling. "And Elissa and I have an appointment I simply can't miss."

Nokigon grinned in response. "I'm sure you can't."

Nokigon stood up. "Anyway, I have to see Gothic right now."

Belthazor raised an eyebrow. "Don't be too hard on him."

Nokigon smiled. But his eyes were bleak.

 

*

Nokigon strode into the Great Hall, and felt a flicker of humour as he witnessed the shock of Lord Gothic.

"Nokigon!" Gothic said, angry now that he'd gotten over his shock. "You should really introduce yourself next time. Anyway, welcome back. You're dismissed."

Nokigon stared at him, feeling blood roaring in his ears. He couldn't believe that someone could be so uncaring. This had gone too far.

"What about my report?"

Gothic waved his hand airily. "Doesn't matter."

"Don't you want to know who has died?" Nokigon hissed.

Gothic looked up. "I said it doesn't matter, Nokigon. And I also said you're dismissed. So get out."

Nokigon spoke then. Each word fell merciless and cold like a hammer blow. "People died out on the fields in front of Gajik Hinor, Gothic. Real people. People I know. That you know. Many were my friends. And you have the cheek to sit there and say it DOESN'T MATTER?!"

Gothic's eyes blazed with anger. "You watch your tongue, Nokigon!"

"Oh, you should watch yours, Gothic. Because I'm reporting to King Sigurd himself tomorrow. And your attitude is not going to go unmentioned. I won't rest until Mortifera is rid of you."

Nokigon stared with hate into Gothic's eyes. Then he stormed out.




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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Apr 2011 at 12:44
I've been inactive for ages, It seems  I have alot to read, but overall well  done!  Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 Apr 2011 at 12:53
Originally posted by Nokigon Nokigon wrote:

 There was nothing he enjoyed more than an honourable fight against a good opponent, and this ticked both boxes.





I liked this play on words..."and this ticked both boxes" 
Well put!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 Apr 2011 at 19:03
Sorry, accidently pressed send when I was halfway through an update.
Come back tomorrow!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 Apr 2011 at 08:58

Nokigon saddled up and rode away from Mortifera, Belthazor beside him, in a surprisingly good mood bearing in mind that he'd just told his ultimate superior that he wouldn't rest until 'Mortifera was rid of him'. He had a feeling of freedom, and bliss- as if a great weight had been lifted from him. Which, he supposed, it had. And he meant every word. The day that Gothic was no longer Lord of Mortifera was not a day too soon.

He and Belthazor rode in companionable silence for a while, until they reached a cross roads. From here, Belthazor would continue south east; whilst Nokigon would go east for his appointment with royalty. They faced each other.

Nokigon could see the wind, pulling gently at Belthazor, pulling towards Aeris; but at the same time it gently pushed him away. Nokigon smiled faintly. Elissa was certainly eager!

But Belthazor was going to be his for a few seconds yet, and he drew breath to speak.

"Well, I guess this is it. Nice meeting you." Nokigon said, smiling slightly sadly. Belthazor nodded.

"I'll still keep in touch- still write to you, and who knows? Maybe we'll meet each other again."

Nokigon nodded, and with that they turned and went their separate ways. Neither looked back.


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It was the next day. Nokigon had stayed for the night in Hastelbury, a Trade Hub belonging to the Council of Illyria. He had been travellling for three hours now, and he then rode to the top of some sharp crags. Nokigon whistled in appreciation.

Centrum. The dead centre of Illyria. The capital. The place where the Council of Illyria meet on the summer and winter solstice, where King Sigurd presides over his Kingdom. And what a place it was!

It was tiered, creating a look somewhat like a cone. The wall's were made out of pristine white marble, fit together so flawlessly that it appeared as if there was not a single blemish. Somehow, Nokigon had a feeling this was the case.

The gate was made out of pure steel, and had been reinforced by Iron. Planted into the centre of the gate was the Council's personal symbol- an elaborate I, surrounded by coiling flowers. This symbol was repeated on several flags, around the city.

At the very top, there was a beautiful, serene palace. No, not a palace, Nokigon thought to himself. A Senate.

As Nokigon watched, the sun rose from behind Nokigon, and bathed the citadel (for it was too powerful to be called a city) in a soft, butter yellow light. 

Finally, Nokigon gently took his eyes away from the beautiful sight and rode on. It would not do to keep King Sigurd waiting, after all.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 Apr 2011 at 01:20
Whens the next chapter?
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