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Lord Loss 
Wordsmith
Joined: 29 Dec 2010
Location: Ireland
Status: Offline
Points: 143 |
 Topic: The First inter race war.
Posted: 03 Apr 2011 at 23:07 |
Synopsis: This is a story about the Great war between orcs and humans/elves.
Tim's hands shook in the bitter cold, his eyes firmly set on the stag that walked slowly in the forest clearing in its search for food. " Steady now..." said the boys father Lord Charles Murray. Tim looked at his father and then turned his attention back to his target. This wasn't the first time Tim went hunting he had been out a good few times before but he still got nervous, Tim pulled out a arrow clipped it onto his bow string. " Make sure of your shot " said Charles...... " You don't want to mess up" he warned "Yes father" Tim replied. The stag began to slowly walk away from sight, Tim pulled back the string and took a deep breath. The arrow whizzed through the air as Tim felt the bow string fall through his fingers , time seemed to stop and the world seemed to stop as Tim eyes focused on the arrow flew through the air. The stag went limp and still the moment the arrow hit just below his heart, the magnificent creature fell helpless with the overwhelming pain it was enduring. " Great shot m'boy!!", said Lord Charles. Tim just smiled with relief. He hadn't disappointed his father today, that was all that he hoped for from this day. He watched his father walk over to the stag that was dying on the forest clearing, it was sight of sadness that a beautiful creature could be brought down in such away.
Thought I'd try a bit of writing, hope you enjoy
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Attila the Hun
Forum Warrior
Joined: 29 Jan 2011
Location: Navvare/FL
Status: Offline
Points: 402 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 02:38 |
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Nokigon appears to have influenced others.. oh well I rate it a 3/5/ You pass.
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It's just a game. :)
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Lord Loss
Wordsmith
Joined: 29 Dec 2010
Location: Ireland
Status: Offline
Points: 143 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 07:56 |
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Have a nice day :)
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Nokigon
Postmaster General
Player Council - Historian
Joined: 07 Nov 2010
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Points: 1452 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 17:26 |
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Go me! /me invites Lord into the great community of writing. It now has three members- you, me and Harry.
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Attila the Hun
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Joined: 29 Jan 2011
Location: Navvare/FL
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Points: 402 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 21:36 |
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It's just a game. :)
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Gemley
Postmaster
Joined: 20 Feb 2011
Location: Ralidor
Status: Offline
Points: 586 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 22:32 |
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whatabout the dwarves?
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lorre
Forum Warrior
Joined: 29 Jun 2010
Location: Groot Kortrijk
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Points: 446 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 23:07 |
 Nokigon wrote:
Go me! /me invites Lord into the great community of writing. It now has three members- you, me and Harry. |
u havent read arianna and sunstorm there profile then
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The battlefield is a scene of constant chaos. The winner will be the one who controls that chaos, both his own and the enemies.
Napoleon Bonaparte
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Attila the Hun
Forum Warrior
Joined: 29 Jan 2011
Location: Navvare/FL
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Points: 402 |
Posted: 04 Apr 2011 at 23:15 |
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I can write!
Once upon a time I was in DarkBlight, was rockband named Reospeedwagon. I left alliance, formed own, died by avenging Untaar. still owe him many elves. The End
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Bragdush the Bald
Greenhorn
Joined: 28 Feb 2011
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Points: 74 |
Posted: 05 Apr 2011 at 10:53 |
Commericial Break in the Inter Race War
Hello. My name is Professor Bragdush of the Human Organ Donation Bank for Starving Orcs and I am here to make an appeal to Humans and Elves everywhere.
There is a crisis of epic proportions happening here in Illyriad and it is happening now.
In the time it has taken to read this advert a thousand little Orc whelps will be crying because they have run low on human bone marrow. Another 50 000 will have rumbling tummies because they have been deprived Krispy Elf Ears?
Human and Elves alleviate the hunger pangs of the needy.
GIVE GENEROUSLY NOW! 
Stop Press! Obese, overweight, need to lose 7lbs of ugly fat! Why not call into Braggy's Spare Part Take Away. Now! 
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Lord Loss
Wordsmith
Joined: 29 Dec 2010
Location: Ireland
Status: Offline
Points: 143 |
Posted: 05 Apr 2011 at 13:28 |
Chapter 2:
The firelight danced across the grey castle walls as Tim ate dinner with his family. Tim looked up from his plate to glance across the weapons and shields that were nailed to the walls, they had been previous items his father had used in the battles he spent have his life in. There was one weapon though that didn't belong to him, in fact it wasn't even a human weapon, it was an orc blade. Tim started to think about the day his father brought the orc blade home, Lord Charles always hated orcs he would often say that "Orcs are a great stain on our otherwise perfect world". Tim didn't exactly agree with this statement , sure orcs are evil and yes the world would be better off without them but perfect?, no it wouldn't be perfect how could it be? with all the crime and poverty in the world?. Lord Charles looked at his son who was still looking at the blade and was deep in thought, "Something wrong son?" Tim eyes quickly turned to his father and he quickly replied " N-no its just..." " Just what son?" . Tim paued before asking " Father would mind telling the story of the orc blade again?" His father smiled , before taking a sip of wine in his goblet. Lord Charles then cleared his throat before saying " Well it started like this......"
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The First inter race war.