Haiku

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         Hello everyone, me again.
        
          After participating in a talk in GC, i decided to write this thread about haikus. A haiku is a japanese poem with three lines in the following order
        
        
         

        
        
         5 syllables
        
        
         7 syllables
        
        
         5 syllables
        
        
         

        
        
         these are quite short poems, as evidenced, but they are usually very good, and many are very funny.
        
        
         This thread is for you to write your own haiku and post it below. there is a very good website for writing haikus:
        
        
         

        
        
         http://writeahaiku.com/
        
        
         

        
        
         so here is my haiku,
        
        
         

        
        
         
          Illy, oh Illy,
         
         
          What a spectacular world
         
         
          Live Long and Prosper
         
        
        
         

        
        
         

        
        
         Please, post only one haiku per post, and wait a page or so before posting another (unless there is 24 hours of inactivity between your posts)
        
        
         

        
        
         

        
        
         Good Luck
         
        

Edited by TheBillPN - 04 Aug 2014 at 10:42

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TheBillPN Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Forum Warrior Joined: 03 Jun 2014 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 305	Post Options Post Reply Quote TheBillPN Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Topic: Haiku Posted: 04 Aug 2014 at 10:39
	Hello everyone, me again. After participating in a talk in GC, i decided to write this thread about haikus. A haiku is a japanese poem with three lines in the following order 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables these are quite short poems, as evidenced, but they are usually very good, and many are very funny. This thread is for you to write your own haiku and post it below. there is a very good website for writing haikus: http://writeahaiku.com/ so here is my haiku, Illy, oh Illy, What a spectacular world Live Long and Prosper Please, post only one haiku per post, and wait a page or so before posting another (unless there is 24 hours of inactivity between your posts) Good Luck Edited by TheBillPN - 04 Aug 2014 at 10:42

Sheza Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Forum Warrior Joined: 16 Oct 2012 Location: Kumala Status: Offline Points: 325	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sheza Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 Aug 2014 at 23:46
	Illy moon bright. Shine on lighting the way marching on show the light at night
	If Horses don't go to Heaven when they die. then I want to go where they go.

Sheza Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Forum Warrior Joined: 16 Oct 2012 Location: Kumala Status: Offline Points: 325	Post Options Post Reply Quote Sheza Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Posted: 04 Aug 2014 at 23:48
	Have another but will wait . Edited by Sheza - 05 Aug 2014 at 00:00
	If Horses don't go to Heaven when they die. then I want to go where they go.

Artefore Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Forum Warrior Player Council - Biographer Joined: 21 Feb 2014 Location: Earf Status: Offline Points: 312	Post Options Post Reply Quote Artefore Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 Aug 2014 at 01:43
	Illy is the best, It's better than the rest. Rhyme, stupid third line! I don't care that haikus don't have to rhyme. I rhyme what I want! There was another haiku I wanted to do, but I forget it. Things about Illy, other random Illy things, can I be done now? Edited by Artefore - 05 Aug 2014 at 01:45
	"don't quote me on that" -Artefore

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	That one sounds like you crossed Mary Poppins with Spock :)

Glin Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Wordsmith Joined: 06 Apr 2014 Location: US Status: Offline Points: 127	Post Options Post Reply Quote Glin Report Post Thanks(0) Quote Reply Posted: 05 Aug 2014 at 06:34
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	lurking is the thing, that makes my heart pound and sing, goes back to lurking credit to Badger7

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	Lurking is the thing That makes my heart pound and sing. Goes back to lurking. (Due respect to Badger7 who composed it but said I could claim as my own) M

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	I f you want kill chat, Just carry on like a prat. Now post after that. Also courtesy of Badger7. M

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